Dream
The saga continues, yesterday we had some snow dusting overnight, when we got up in the morning most everything was covered with a thin layer of snow! That’s kind of unusual especially this time of the year in Georgia.
Today’s post will be kind of unusual too, I’ve decided to try my hand at writing something, you call it what you’d think it should be called and let me know. I ask you to be the most sincere and tell me what you think about it. Thanks!
“Dream”
Blurry images circle in my mind
like a dozen bees trying to taste the nectar of a flower
Images dancing in a magical rhythm for a silent musical song that I can not hear.
O dream that has me, totally possessed, show me the truth or let me be myself!
The enchanted blend of colors and images continues… I can hear it now! I can hear the irresistible melody!
Am I still dreaming or is it real?
Why are those stars going around? Why is the sun so bright?
Why am I drifting toward this brilliant galaxy?
This vivid dream is a tangled yarn of impossibilities
Bring me back to my real world!
I do not understand this abstract existence!
I want to wakeup to my world of reality!
Please… let it be just a dream!
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Text and photographs © HJ Ruiz – Avian101
H.J. Ruiz - Avian101 
HJ, you have a wonderful poetic vein. I loved your creation, ” … like a dozen bees trying to taste the nectar of a flower” is a lovely metaphor. To me it sounds like the dream of a bird. Well done! Your little friends make a nice poetic frame, too. 🙂
Carmen, you are so kind! Thank you! I needed a bit of encouragement. I appreciate your kind comment very much. 🙂
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I love the chickadee picture.
Thank you my friend! 🙂
great shots..
Thanks! 🙂
Very nice! I would call this free verse poetry, and your photos are very poetical as well! Great verbal imagery to match the photo images.
Amy you’re so kind! Thank you! 🙂